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Acheron Parthenopaeus
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Acheron Parthenopaeus
Reality is Illusory. basic information ___________________________________________
Nicknames: Snow, Ash, Parth Gender: Male Age: 20 Blood Type: O Village: Shirotori Village Rank: A Skill Rank: A physical information ___________________________________________
Acheron Parthenopaeus is a man that stands at a height of about five foot ten inches. His purple hair it's self is about three feet long proving to stop around his lower back area as his legs are a bit longer than his torso proving his forte to be more so speed than the strength that comes with top heaviness. To hold the hair back and keep it from interfering from hindering his vision, Ash wears a white head band in the place of his normal village headband. His normal one is worn around his right arm under the purple coat that he wears at all times. Said coat is adorned with white diamonds along it placed in a formation that if seen from a great distance would be noted to those who knew his clan and their symbol to be the very same one just in a very different color. Ash's eyes are a light purple that seem to glisten a bright silver when shone in the light of the sun and a pale white in the light of the moon. The coat he wears seems to be close to skin tight on his arms and torso sporting the amount of toned muscle that he has although his body is lean, not having much bulk for whatever reason. Acheron wears a black necklace made of what appears to be string, but is actually a black wire that he uses to house several charms that was given to him by his father. Each charm is said to be from one of the medical ninja of the senju clan's past and are there not only for protection, but to channel the skills of those that came before the wearer. The last of his ensamble are two twin kata that are also heirlooms Height: 5'11 Weight: 175 Measurements: Not on the first date~
personality information ___________________________________________
---Acheron, while only seventeen, has several ways about him that most adults or rather older people wouldn't have yet developed. He has an air about him that seems to be mostly serious while that isn't very true. His serious nature lies mostly dormant in most situations only coming out during a fight, mission, or any other situation that requires he drop the, very fake, friendly act and get down to immediate business. In times of peril or in any situation where most would show fear, anger, hesitation, or sadness Acheron can and most likely will keep a very cool head to fully asses and understand what is going on. His father's first lesson of life to him was that anyone ninja or regular person that could not keep their head on their shoulders was useless to everyone around them and would only get more people than themselves hurt or killed. This was a harsh but necesary lesson for young Acheron to learn and his love for helping others also was spurred from it. Those few words from his father shaped the entirety of the male's personality and his choice in career, ie becoming a ninja and in turn one that specializes in medicine and the medical arts. When around those he considers friends Acheron seems to be more easy going than not proving that his stoic face during missions can be morphed into that of a teenager who doesn't seem to have the weight of his family on his shoulders. As far as relationships go the young shinobi has never had a single girlfriend or kiss for that matter as he feared that such actions would deter him from his goals and that was unacceptable. All in all the young man is more of a normality than anyone could realize. The truth to it all was that Acheron was a down to earth kinda guy with an arrogant air that fitted most under the umbrella of Uchiha, but he was not one to be swept under the rug and laid with the rest of the people in a group. As a youth he realized that he was handsome and that didn't stop him from not taking it all to the head and becoming a monsterous asshole that most expected him to be. He was infact the exact opposite and hated fighting unless there was a real reason before him, but he couldn't help but thing as he fluttered through the pages of the book that it had some truth behind it. He was a medical pro who made choices that most wouldn't but again that was a hinderance that was taken too far by the imaginative butler. He always was one to blow things out of proporting, but that wasn't something that the young man lingered on. Like most things in this world he let it be if it wasn't of immediate importance to his mission or to him and the book of a butler that was over exaggerated wasn't. Sexuality: Hetero Likes:
Dislikes:
- Irrationality
- Idiocy
- Impracticality
Clan: Uchiha Ninja Specialization: Main: Fuuinjutsu Sub: Ninjutsu Elemental Specialization: Main: Lightning Sub: Fire | Wind Strengths:
- Can weave seals and preform jutsu single handedly
- Was born with an elemental affinity for fire and lightning.
- Extremely large chakra pool(30% Increase)
Weaknesses:
- Is mentally unstable to the point where certain words or phrases, known to be ordinary day to day sayings, could make him flip and attack most allies without remorse.
- Being Born with two elemental affinities as a base removed the option of more than one being learned through normal means as he progressed.
- 30% decrease in strength
INVENTORY Simple Equipment:
- Kunai
- Shuriken
- Wire (excesses)
- Two Ceremonial Katana (black steel chakra nature compatible)
- Smoke bombs
- Sealing and Summoning Scrolls
- WIND TECHNIQUES:
Name: Wind Release Stream Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: D Jutsu Prerequisites: Inhale and Exhale method Description: By blowing air from their mouth, the user is able to change direction while in mid-air at high speeds. In the anime, it was shown it can also be used to blow up a dust cloud, concealing one's location and movements.
Name: Wind Release Gale Palm Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites:in description Description: : A simple technique that when the users hands are clapped together, wind is compressed and transformed into a powerful gale. This technique, when used as an isolated attack has the power to easily knock over a human. Though the true value comes from using it together with projectile weapons like shuriken or kunai. Their speed, power, and ability to wound or even kill are all increased several times.
Name: Wind Release:Great Breakthrough Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites:Handseals Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight.
Name: Wind Release;Wind Enhanced Arsenal Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites:Blowing Out the wind Description: This is simply said the ability to enhance standard ninja tools by breathing out wind chakra onto them. Danzo has displayed the ability to do this in his fight with Sasuke. If the user enhanced senbon with this jutsu, the needles will gain a white glow and will gain additional piercing potential, being now able to pierce a human body. In a kunai’s case, a veil of wind chakra will be formed around the knife increasing its sharpness and its reach to the point of a standard katana. Finally, if it is used on a shuriken, it will cause a veil of slicing wind to surround the spinning weapon. This makes it sharp enough to cut through trees, rock and armor, as well as extending its range. A very versatile jutsu.
Name: Wind Release:Twin Serpent Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Hand Seals Description: The user performs the required hand seals and whips up two miniature tornado's on both his sides. Said tornado's are two meters thick and ten meters high/long. The user can freely manipulate the tornado's and have them bend like two massive arms using them to deflect attacks or deal heavy physical damage. The user has to keep both hands in the same seal or else the tornado's will dissapear.l
Name: Wind Release:Vaccuum Sphere Canon/Custom: Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Description Description: The user takes a deep breath and then exhales several small blasts of wind chakra in such a manner that they are dispersed over an expansive range, enough to make it difficult to avoid them entirely without taking any damage. Due to the properties of this technique, the expelled blasts are capable of piercing into and potentially through an opponent's flesh when they collide, in a similar manner to how bullets function.
Name: Wind Release:Vaccuum Wave Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Wind Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Description Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales the wind chakra compressing the released air into a solitary blade of wind. The blade’s trajectory can be manipulated by moving the head while the wind is being exhaled.
Name: Wind Release Slash Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Description Description: The user waves his hand and creates multiple blades of wind, which combine to form a single, large blade of air. The technique was powerful enough to stop Susanno's movements, but wasn't able to break through its defence. The true beauty of this technique is that it requires no seals.
Name: Wind Release Great Wind Sphere Canon/Custom: Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Description Description: A stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.
Name: Wind Release Pressure Bomb Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fuuton Type:Ninjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: After making the required handseals, the user will take a deep breath and exhale a ball of wind the size of a football. The ball will travel a distance of 20 meters, after which it will explode. The ball is made of extremely pressured wind and when it explodes it will release a small compact hurricane that will cover a circle of 20 feet. Everything within those 8 meters will be torn to shreds by the cutting winds of the hurricane
- LIGHTNING TECHNIQUES:
Jutsu Name:Body Pathway Derangement Rank:A Element: Raiton Type: Medical Description: An extremely high-level technique, used as a medical ninjutsu. The human body is controlled with electrical signals from the brain, but a person who had those electrical signals cut off with this technique will become unable to make their body move as they want. By transforming the chakra within one's body and giving it the properties of electricity, one creates an electric field. As soon as a strike of the hand lands, electricity is poured into the enemy's nervous system, severing the signals and deranging their body control. The target's body moves in any way, except how they want it to move. For the common shinobi, battle, not to mention even just walking, will become impossible. However, the victim can partially overcome the technique if they manage to relearn the connection between their brain and their limbs, as Kabuto Yakushi, being a medical-nin himself, demonstrates. This feat however is not an easy one and takes a high amount of concentration and intelligence. Because she's an expert in medical treatments, Tsunade was able to master this technique.
Jutsu Name:Lightning Release Shadow Clone Rank: A Element: Raiton Type: ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching. And anything besides the user in a fifteen meter range.
Jutsu Name:Lightning Release:Electric Magnetic Murder Rank: A Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.
Jutsu Name:Lightning Release:False Darkness Rank: B Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Description: Kakuzu's lightning-element mask emits lightning in the shape of a spear from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. All these makes it next to impossible to evade.
Jutsu Name: Sixteen Pillar Binding Rank:A Element: Lightning Type: Attack Description: A more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven-like structure to trap the enemy. Once the enemy is trapped in the oven-like box, lightning would shoot out towards them. It is used after Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop to cover the enemy in mud and then followed by Fire Release: Fired Pottery Technique, creating flames inside the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilising the enemy.
Jutsu Name: Four Pillar Binding Rank:B Element: Lightning Type: Attack Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, then shoot bolts of lightning, immobilising the target and possibly doing damage to them.
- FIRE TECHNIQUES:
Name: Great Dragon Fire Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites:Description Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.
Name: Fire Release:Great Fireball Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type:Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flamethrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most genin should not be able to do this technique.The Uchiha clan also uses this technique as a "coming of age" rite and as such was a common and one of the more favoured technique amongst them.
Name: Fire Release: Flame Bullet Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Fire Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: The Fire Release: Flame Bullet technique is executed by the user gathering oil in their mouth which is created by chakra, spitting it out, and igniting it. This technique simply shoots a flame bullet at the enemy. If the amount of oil that is prepared is kept down, the time it takes to invoke the technique is reduced. This allows the enemy to be stricken unaware, allowing the oil-containing flame bullet to burn them up completely. It is also possible to shoot out a series of flame bullets by partitioning the oil. If this technique is fired after covering the enemy with oil using the Toad Oil Bullet, it has the power to wound or kill. This also keeps down the consumption of chakra.
Name: Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Description: The user kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. Since the art of having the flames obey the user's will is outrageously difficult, its mastery is restricted to a limited number of skilful shinobi. The spat out flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.
Name: Blaze Release: Kagutsuchi Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Description,Ms Description: Acheron uses this technique to apply Shape Transformation to the inextinguishable black flames of Amaterasu, turning the flames into a spiked barrier that not only shields him, but also burns and pierces any opponent that touches the flames. While Amaterasu is cast from Ash's left eye, this technique is cast from his right eye
Name: Shield Of Black Flame Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type:Ninjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: MS Description: Acheron manipulates the flames of Amaterasu to cover an item with the flames, surrounding himself with a shield of black fire. In addition to the damage it can inflict, this has the psychological effect of causing enemies to hesitate to attack him.
Name: Ameratsu Canon/Custom: Canon Element: Katon Type:Ninjutsu Rank: S Jutsu Prerequisites: Description,Ms Description: Amaterasu is the highest level Fire Release technique, and according to Zetsu, one of the most powerful ninjutsu in existence. It is said to represent the the antipode to Tsukuyomi, a genjutsu of similar power and a fellow Mangekyō Sharingan dōjutsu.
The jet-black flames of the Amaterasu, said to be the fires from hell that are as hot as the sun, ignite at the focus of the user's vision. Though the flames have been stated to be unavoidable, Acheron can hit even a moving target with this technique as long as he is focused on that target.
- OTHER TEHCNIQUES:
Name: Shadow Clone Canon/Custom: Cannon Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.
Name: Hiding with Camoflauge Canon/Custom: Cannon Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills.
Name: Fire Sealing Canon/Custom: Cannon Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: This technique allows the user to seal fire into a scroll. The user writes the seal on a scroll and then performs the required hand seals. This causes a vapour to appear from the scroll, enveloping the fire and sealing it on the scroll as the kanji for seal (封). Jiraiya used this technique to seal away the black fire from Itachi Uchiha's Amaterasu technique.
Name: Five Elements Unseal Canon/Custom: Cannon Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: When Jiraiya performs this technique on Naruto, the "Five Elements" referred to in the name are the Chinese Five Elements, the Five Movements (五行, Japanese: Gogyō, Chinese: Wǔxíng):
Metal (金, Chinese: jīn), Wood (木, Chinese: mù), Water (水, Chinese: shuǐ), Fire (火, Chinese: huǒ), and Earth (土, Chinese: tǔ), This suggests the elements are merely symbolic. However, when Kazuma performs this technique on Sora, the five elements are shown as the five chakra elements used in most other techniques, the Five Greats (五大, Godai): Earth (土, tsuchi), Water (水, mizu), Fire (火, hi), Wind (風, kaze), and Lightning (雷, kaminari).
Name: Five Element Sealing Canon/Custom: Cannon Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: A Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time. Orochimaru performed this jutsu to tamper with the seal on the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. The original seal allowed the Nine-Tails' chakra to seep out into Naruto Uzumaki, but the additional seal disturbs this, preventing Naruto from using the Nine-Tails' chakra or even controlling his own chakra properly. This is because an odd-numbered seal creates an imbalance when placed on top of an even-numbered seal. When Orochimaru later notices that the seal has been removed, he remarks that there are very few ninja capable of doing so.
Name: All Mighty Seal Canon/Custom: Custom Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: S Jutsu Prerequisites: Touch Description: The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person's body. This seal binds with the persons chakra with his in a manner that allows him to control what goes in and out of their chakra stream. Outside chakras or foreign seals would be dispersed without any harm coming to the bearer of the seal. It works as a gate guard that blocks foreign entities but at the same time alerts Acheron when said entities attempt to enter that person's chakra stream. It doesn't prohibit healing and a powerful enough chakra such as a bijuu could break it partially requiring an immediate fixing within a three day span or the seal will be completely broke. In conjunction with five elements seal it acts as a near perfect barrier for keeping things in or out and can only be undone by the person who put it there. Those taught to do so personally by Acheron can use it, but only Acheron can double lock the seals in turn doubling it's power. With enough time and effort they can be triple and even further locked although such takes an amazing amount of time to do with the precision it would take meaning that levels one and two are the only ones that can be done instantly and with very little chakra use.
Name: Summoning Style: Contract Disposal Canon/Custom: Custom Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Touch Description: The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being's body. It pulls free any ties to that person or being to a summoning contract and dispurses marking that the contract has been broken for only a topic without the use of other fuuinjutsu.
Name: Evolutionary Seal Canon/Custom: Custom Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: Touch Description: The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being. The seal immediately sips into their chakra stream and body binding them to Acheron as a summoning that he can bring to him by one of his many personal summoning methods. This seal slightly differs from the All Mighty Seal, but if Acheron so choses it can be tied into it.
Name: Seal Summoning Jutsu Canon/Custom: Custom Element: --- Type: Fuuinjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals Description: The user of this seal, which is actually a summoning jutsu that he makes by bringing two parts of his body together, can bring one of his summons to his aid. Clapping his hands and placing them down, simply clapping them, snapping his fingers, or the average summoning jutsu hand seals all work to get one of his summons be it contract or through the evolutionary seal to his aid. This jutsu mutually acts as a reverse summoning allowing him to use the same means to go to one of his summonings.
historical information ___________________________________________ Similar to all other ninja and in turn persons Acheron had to have been born. The joining of two chuunin, one a kirigakure woman and the other a konoha senju, is what lead to the birth of this young man. The first year of his life was spent under the care of both of his loving parents within the village hidden in the leaves where his father was born although Acheron's birth place remains a secret even to him. His first year of life, although not memorable to him due to being an infant, was quite uneventful. Everyday the same routine proved dominant over his young life. Awake, suckle his mother's bosom for sustenance, the receiving of cleaning, and of course sleep. These were the relatively good days of his life and those came to a sever end on the first anniversary of his death. The blood spilled changed everything. The first event that proved unfortunate for the young Mr. Parthenopaeus was the arrival of a tracker ninja. It was one sent by the mizukage in an attempt to retrieve Acheron's mother. Normally that wouldn't be a problem for the woman, but the fact that her guard was down and that she was looking for the young male who had waddled off in some odd direction left her abnormally open. Like many other days in Konohagakure it was sunny, warm, vibrant, but there was some type of chill in the forest that even the most hardened of men couldn't shake. The toddler that waddled about couldn't have noticed but he was being stalked by a predator, a ninja that knew who he was and how to use him for what he wanted. A baby, what sane man would use a baby you ask? None other than Taki Shujiko, execution extrodinaire. The lad had no chance if the man chose to attack him, but that was not his goal at all. His only task here was to ensure that the woman came back to the village hidden in the mist with no problems at all. In a nut shell he was not to die and not to cause any casualties which seemed out of his area of expertise. That would not stop the greedy ninja from undertaking the mission and that he did. Now presented with the opporotunity he needed after traveling for days to get to the hidden leaf village without a paper trail the man was satisified. It would seem as if the Ninja Gods were smiling down at him with the presentation of such a gift as a young child to avoid any extra work than needed. There was only one unknown variable, an x factor it seemed. Taki had no idea who the lads father was and that in turn meant that he hadn't the slightest of ideas about the identity of the lover of the boy's mother, his target. Without that information missions such as these tended to get tricky no matter who or what was at stake whether it be a small amount or Ryo or a village's most kept secret. It was a matter of choice and since time was not on his side Taki decided that it would be best to grab the child now and that was what he attempted to do. Jumping at a sort of downward angle towards the small bundle of life there would have been the best route to take, but of course Taki chose the flashier route. In a display for figures that weren't palpable he jumped landing silently behind the child, his hands moving to grip. The moment his feet touched the ground a tree a few meters behind him rustled just a little bit and out from a limb shot a wooden spike that pierced through the man that tried to capture the young boy. Had he then the wits about him that he has not the young Parthenopaeus would have realized it a clone from the lack of blood and surpluses of white smoke. The fact of the matter was that these things were all irrelevant to him as his full attention was already given to a small butterfly fluttering past him, it's wings nearly glowing in the sunlight. Taki, the real taki, was studying from a nearby branch for the source of the spike that impaled his shadow clone. The mere thought was appauling to him, but he cast his rage aside momentarilly to search for the cause of his newfound head pains. He hated these headaches, but they would plauge him no longer as the man that Acheron had known as his papa beheaded the hunter ninja. The boy was too open here and his father knew it so that day he and the boy's mother came to an agreement to allow him to live and be raised under his grandfather under the alias of a son. The years past and the young Parthenopaeus remained duly ignorant of the deception that was cast over his life. It was a bit off to him that his father had white hairs while the fathers of the other children sported vigor and vitality, but things like questioning were beyond the young man. The joy of his enrollment in the hidden mist's academy was soon overshadowed by the sheer delight that his "parents" felt about his becoming a genin and choice to follow in his "father" and late "older brother's" footsteps in becoming a medical ninja. A year later and many mental scars later he became a chuunin and from there his story continues, but that is where my knowledge of the young Parthenopaeus and his past comes to an end. He is now the age of seventeen and flourishing in the mist village. Yawning the young shinobi grabbed the hilt of his blade bringing it back into it's place at his waist and in it's sheath, swinging it in the midst of said action to free teh blood of the elderly butler from it. The young mister Parthenopaeus as he had liked to call him had now caused an end to the older male's life and with that a solid and swift end to the bullshit that he was writing in that book of his. To dare say that Acheron was a part of the Senju clan was preposterous. He was what most liked to refer to as an Uchiha when in all honesty he was neither of the bickering and rivalsome clans. He was a Parthenopaeus blessed with the gift of the sharingan from the sage of six paths. The other titles meant nothing to the young shinobi. He was raised a Parthenopaeus and a medic who also specialized in taijutsu and that was that. His sword skills were above average and his killing of the man that he had met only once prior to his slaying had awoken Acheron's Mangekyou sharingan. miscellaneous information ___________________________________________ Face Claim: UNKNOWN CHARACTER CHARACTER Other Characters: None Password: Admin Checked Extras:
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Mon Jun 17, 2013 7:07 pm | |
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- There are no S-rank Shirotori spots available, check the Open Ranks thread.
- Why does the description mention a leaf headband?
- App says he's 21 but personality says 17
- Liking both calamity and peace is contradictory.
- Susanoo needs to be trained IC.
- Wrong password, read the rules.
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:30 am | |
| Removed Sus Changed rank Changed description The age mix-up and contradiction in personality were both clearly addressed in my history. Couldn't find the password thing in the rules.
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:41 am | |
| Remove all the extras spaced from the app, as well as all the extra [*] signs. If you can't then I'll gladly do it for you sweetie. <3 | |
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 4:19 am | |
| - A rank only has two elemental affinities.
- Can only have two jutsu specialties
- Personality still gives an age that contradicts the rest of the app.
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 5:20 am | |
| Besides the first two points Arumi said (the third point can be overlooked unless another admin votes in her favor). I'll also like to add: - Quote :
- Jutsu Name: Summoning Style Contract Disposal
Rank:B Element: Range: Touch Type:Fuuinjutsu Description: The user of this seal sets it to wherever he touches the person or being's body. It pulls free any ties to that person or being to a summoning contract and dispurses marking that the contract has been broken for good. This can only be a permanent contract break if it's a higher rank. Up the rank or make it so that it is permanent until the victim reforms the seal - as it is very possible. | |
| | | Acheron Parthenopaeus
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:06 am | |
| Edits made that were to the standards of all put forth by all parties including the age of my character. | |
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 7:43 am | |
| We've had a jutsu that could temporarily release a summon, and that was ranked D-S. A permanent break seems like it should at least be S rank if we allow it at all. | |
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:44 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 1:45 pm | |
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| | | Acheron Parthenopaeus
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 6:17 pm | |
| Application status equals updated. Age changed and jutsu now only lasts one topic so ranked back down to B as no perma breaks in seals are allowed with a single jutsu. In other words, BUMP. | |
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| Subject: Re: Partheonpaeus, Acheron Tue Jun 18, 2013 6:57 pm | |
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- Extremely large chakra pool needs a percent max is a 30 percent in crease and changed your flaws the last one on there isn't really a flaw as its hard to mask your presence unless it a special ability or multiple jutsu's so its not really a flaw in my opinion.
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