Shugyoku Yakushin
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Age : 39
Village : Donzokogakure
Rank : Donkage
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 | | Subject: Shugyoku Clan Sat Jun 29, 2013 3:13 pm | |
| Clan Name: --- Shugyoku Bloodline Name: Shugyoku Bloodline Ability: Shoton Location: Donzokogakure Clan History: They branched, originally, from a Senju clan long ago. Having been born a mistake, one of the members, his great great grandfather, was the first to show a talent for a new chakra. He was able to mold it into crystal, and seeing his training as an abomination to the Senju name, they banished the man, but he did not give up. He took on a new name and started a family in Donzokogakure. Now, that family had flourished quite a bit, three generations down, and their power was near to being respected even in other villages. With the death of the last Laird, Yakushin, his eldest son, was made to overtake his position. This was some time before he was made Donkage, but it was the most important even in his life at the time. His first action was to open relations with the Koumori below them, and personally saw to it that contracts were made and their families were united. Clan traits: Upon the creation of Yakushin's "night eyes", other members have strived to achieve them as well, but few have ever returned, and none have received the darkness's blessing. One girl, however, after a few months, did return totally blind. Luckily, the Shugyoku clan has close relations with the Koumori creatures that dwell in the depths of blackness, as Yakushin wanted to unite his two families. Clan Weaknesses: They're relatively poor. Being one of the smallest clans in Donzokogakure, they dont have very much political power among the other clans. It's a good thing their leader is the Donkage, right? Requirements: Must be born into it for the Kekkei Genkai, but marriage with a member of another clan is allowed. Members-Shugyoku, Mira: Mother Alive-Shugyoku, Kanna: Younger Sistser Alive-Shugyoku, Saruhana: Father and Former Laird Deceased-Other members number at around 13, but 6 of those are married into the clan. Jutsu- D-RANK TECHNIQUES:
Name: Crystal Needles
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can shoot out a dozen sharp needles made of pink crystal at their target. All ranges.
- C-RANK TECHNIQUES:
Name: Crystal Wheel
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals.
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can spin a mass of fast spinning shoton chakra mass from their feet, up behind them and over their heads and back down in front of them to their feet to form a wheel. Using it's fast spinning motion, the ninja can cut their way through the air and across the surface of the earth and water to allow them to reach very high speeds. More often used as a form of high speed transport over a large flat plain.
Name: Crystal Hexagonal Shuriken
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can create six sided, snowflake shaped shuriken and send them flying at a target.
Name: Crystal Mirror
Canon/Custom: Custom
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can form a crystal mirror that looks like a snowflake in front of the user.
- B-RANK TECHNIQUES:
Name: Crystal Armor
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can coat their bodies in a thin, but strong layer of crystal which improves defense. The armor is completely transparent, and so can only be seen when light refracts off of the surface.
Name: Crystal Lance
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can mass a large lance around their right arm and use it to impale their target. Mid range.
Name: Jade Crystal Blade
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can mass together a large amount of crystal chakra and compress it down further into a small, jade blue blade attached to the outside of the user's forearm. Lasts until dispelled.
Name: Tearing Crystal Falling Dragon
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can mass together a large amount of chakra from a single point, making it grow outwards into a long dragon. It can be rode upon like a mount, and attack enemies at the will of the user. Multiple dragons may be summoned at once, but that is to the limit of the user. All ranges.
Name: Crystal Shuriken Wild Dance
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can surround themselves in crystal particles, and focusing on the speed and density, they can quickly create and launch from the fast moving particles shuriken made of crystals.
Name: Jade Crystal Clone Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals and a Crystal Mirror having previously been formed.
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can have their reflection walk from the mirror and into the world. The clone is made of crystal, and because it reflects the caster, it reflects the presence of their chakra as well, making it very difficult for even the most skill Byakugan users to tell the difference.
Name: Crimson Fruit
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can surround a target with a dome of strong crystal. Short range. Can be used defensively or to trap a target.
- A-RANK TECHNIQUES:
Name: Jade Crystal Wall Eighth Formation
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can erupt a massive amount of crystal chakra to quickly expand over a wide area. The crystal reforms as it's broken away, making it very difficult to break through, but the user of this technique is locked within until they choose to drop it or they run out of chakra.
Name: Crystal Pentagonal Prison
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can encase a target in crystal, locking them in place. If smashed, the crystal and what is inside of it will turn to dust. To use this technique, the user must make contact with a target using either their own body or their crystals.
Name: Crystal Imprisonment Wave
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can attack a large number of groups by entrapping multiple tragets in Pentagonal Prisons. All ranges.
Name: The God's Crossing Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can send a wave of crystals jutting up from the ground in sharply angled pillar to pierce the target from below. This technique can be used through the extension of his crystal.
Name: Crystal Hexagonal Shuriken Wild Dance
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can quickly launch a huge number of Hexagonal Shuriken at the target to rittle them with six sided crystal stars.
Name: Giant Hexagonal Shuriken
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can form a single, but very large hexagonal shuriken. It's shaped like a snowflake, and is a solid slab of thin crystal mean to slice cleanly through a target.
- S-RANK TECHNIQUES:
Name: Jade Crystal Labyrinth Technique
Canon/Custom: Canon
Element: Crystal
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals
Description: Using one's chakra, a member of the Shugyoku clan can manipulate crystal to cover a huge expanse of area and encase all who it encompasses in a complex labyrinth made of jade crystal. Given the physical properties of a crystal, an attack that does not cover a wide area will find the power dissipating throughout the flat surface, making it nearly impossible to break like that. One must attack with a strong enough attack to break the crystal, but cover a wide area with the attack to prevent the force of the impact from being broken up. While inside, the intricately designed pathways would be made all the more difficult to navigate as the crystals reflect fake pathways and images of those who are trapped.
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Hirano Arumi
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| | Subject: Re: Shugyoku Clan Sat Jun 29, 2013 5:35 pm | |
| - Remove the ---, that's just a placeholder.
- Crystal Pentagonal Prison is way too much for a D rank. I'd say B or A.
- In the show, Crimson Fruit could survive a hit from a bijuu. Again, way too much for D-rank.
- Crystal Imprisonment Wave should be A or S.
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Shugyoku Yakushin
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| | Subject: Re: Shugyoku Clan Sat Jun 29, 2013 10:34 pm | |
| I completely understand. I moved Crimson Fruit to B and Crystal Pentagonal Prison as well as Crystal Imprisonment Wave to A | |
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| | Subject: Re: Shugyoku Clan Sat Jun 29, 2013 11:18 pm | |
| Approved 1/2, though I would still recommend removing the --- from the jutsus. | |
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Kenji Jinsei
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| | Subject: Re: Shugyoku Clan Tue Jul 30, 2013 5:20 am | |
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